Sex... Pain or pleasure? I wrote this poem let me know what u think

Sex... Pain or pleasure? I wrote this poem let me know what u think

Pain is pleasure pleasure is pain what to win what to gain should I lay in this bed or let it all go to my head the touch the warming feel finally somthing real his hands soft fingers steady finally were breathing heavy slowly my heart starts racing his pulse is pacing then looking into his eyes I'm just another girl in disguise does he want me or someone else imagination who could tell then I wake up the pain is real wish this wasn't something I could feel my soul has been ripped from my aching body trembling and now I see sex wasn't all it's made out to be the after shock is real like and earth quake but only this pain I feel I want somthing more to be loved for who I am not just a body who can lay on a bed someone to be potentially wed now I'm facing reality is sex all it's made out to be ?

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  • Clearly it entells a story but the words your using is not appealing as so to say. If I were to rewrite if I'll send it to you in message if that's okay with you. But I definitely like it and know where you coming from with this. 4/5

    • Ya well I wrote it really fast like 5 mins

    • Look at your bad self, okay. This is still good for 5 minutes. Are you into poetry?