Which plot is hotter/fancier?

It is about a fantasy story. So the basic plot is, a girl goes to a (literally) billionaires' BDSM/fetish club to get what she desperately works for, which is extremely hard for her. The difference is, there are two possible choices for the girl character setup.

(1) The girl comes from a quite affluent family (say, top 5%), and she is highly smart and competent (say, going to Ivy League and scoring top) while really attractive, but her family in no way can have access into the billionaire circles, which means she can be much more successful if she can make friends with them.

(2) The girl comes from a quite poor family, say, bottom 10%, and she is average at most things, except she is really attractive, so in order to get out of poverty for her and her family, she was recruited into the BDSM/fetish club.

There are a few common things:

(A) Both girls are quite innocent, never had sex, never got naked in front of anyone, never knew anything about BDSM/fetish, etc, and did not really realize what they signed up for, despite being told before;

(B) Both girls are perfect for BDSM/fetish stuff, great flexibility for challenging bondage positions, great ticklishness for tickling (such as tickled by a group of 4 or tickled for more than an hour, etc), great skin for heightened sensation reacting to whipping (such as flogger, single-tail whip, or even cane and others), etc;

(C) Both girls are very submissive.

So which character do you think will make the story more fanciful.
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  • First, I hope you know about BDSM and everything connected, how it works, the dynamics and everything.

    It will make much more sense with the first possibility, having the woman to be of higher class.
    Still, hope you have done the research, virgin women like you are talking about are usually not risk-takers, like going to such a club or just jumping right into it and usually, it goes by slowly - or of course, they might end up with a sub frenzy.
    But there are some psychological things you really need to research about with this.

    Also about the fact that there are different kinds of submissive and just because you're a submissive, doesn't mean you submit to everyone.

    • It is a story, so it does not always have to be realistic on every aspect. I think you had misunderstood the setting? I can ignore quite some unrealistic aspects while still make the story not absurd or ridiculous. For a story, which one do you think is better?

    • Yeah, because research is not important... Anyway, I already did answer the question.

    • Okay, I misunderstood then, but I think I know your points, such as virgin women typically not being risk-takers, and I agree largely. But the point is, this is a story, so some aspects can be unrealistic, or even have to be a bit unrealistic to sound fanciful. For example, a virgin girl from a fairly affluent family got into a BDSM/fetish club, which she did not understand what she was getting into beforehand. Why do you think the first setup is better than the second one? What are your reasons?

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