Could I be an Erotic Writer?

[NicolaJ35]

This morning I went over to see a friend...

It was cloudy and warm so I wore a short skirt and a thin jumper as I was hoping it would turn into a nice day...

She lives out in the country and the plan was to go for a walk then have lunch at a Pub...

When I arrived, one of her guy friends was there looking under the bonnet of his truck...

We chatted for a few minutes then she said 'take your skirt off, I have an idea'...

Now i'm wearing only a thin jumper, black thong and stockings...

Sarah was now wearing a t-shirt and black panties...

She grabbed my hand, shouted 'Craig, let us up there' then pulled me towards the truck, stepping up onto the bumper'...

'Craig, get your phone out and take a pic' she shouted as we were messing around under the bonnet...

We were giggling as he took a few more photos, sticking our arses out...

Sarah then unclipped my bra and turned me around and sat me on the edge, above the radiator grille...

Lifting my jumper up she started to squeeze and caress my tits...

I lifted her t-shirt up and pinched her nipples playfully...

Now getting so hot, I whipped my jumper and bra off...

Sarah has the most amazing, shapely DDs...

Mine are C cup, very pert...

By this time, Craig was getting really turned on and had a big boner...

But he wasn't having either of us...

He said he was going soon, so we jumped off the truck and went inside...

Spending most of the day eating each other.

[PrudentGuy]

LOL! I have the same question... read mine:

This morning, when I
finished brushing up and
getting ready for breakfast, Alice is already in her business trench coat. As I greeted her “Good morning, rushing off”, she replied in
a haste as she walked to
the door, replying “Yes,
rushing for a morning
meeting.”

As she opened the door,
she turned back and exclaimed, “Oh, how
forgetful I am! Look, I
forgot to put on my clothes!”

While she was speaking,
she opened her trench coat and there she was, totally naked beneath it.
I looked at her and totally
dumbfounded. She looks
spectacular and her breasts stood firm and her areolas appeared to point straight at me.

“Oh I must rush!” she said,
kicked on the door to close it, and then dropped her trench coat behind her.

Then she walked briskly
toward me and enters her
bedroom. I just stared hard at her naked body, cleaned and ready for (corporate) actions.

As she entered her
bedroom, she smiled at me, and while picking up her blouse to dress up, she said “please close the door, if you don’t mind”.

I just filled my mouth with
another spoonful of oat.
“Oh look how I was distracted. I forgot to put
on my bra.” While saying,
she stripped off her blouse again, naked once more. I just looked, with pleasure.

Then she slowly put her bra on, then her blouse and finally her tight skirt.

After that, she walks past me and planted a good-bye kiss on my left cheek.
“See you tonight” she said,
as she briskly walked out
the door. But she did not
wear a panty! And I am too elated to pass any
comment!

After breakfast, I go to work...

End of part 1.

How? Can I? LOL! (I write for my own amusement because these are extracts from my sexual fantasies.)

[NicolaJ35]

Keep going

[Tunasub]

Very good... a little more on the setting of it all and more dirty details. Over all ill give it...2.5 boners out of 5.
Only because it's the 1st and only one I've read from you.. hopefully you can reach 5 boner status eventually.😉

[NicolaJ35]

I'll work on the dirty details, don't think that will be too difficult Not bad for a first attempt but i'll have to work much harder to get 5/5 boners/wet pussies

[Tunasub]

I'm sure that you will be able to reach that goal...😁

[NicolaJ35]

I know I will For me too lol

[Tunasub]

👍🏾

[NicolaJ35]

Hehe

[All4ur_pleazure]

@nicolaj35
Yes. When it comes to writing erotica just remember who your audience will be. Your bonus is you know how women think and feel so play on that when writing. Even if you write a male/female story focus on the woman part. One of the many mistakes people make when writing erotic is trying to add in what the opposite sex is feeling and not knowing. I know some erotica authors that will go as far as asking the opposite sex to look at and give opinions on their stories.
other than that I’ll say this is a good start. I would love to read more.

[NicolaJ35]

Thanks a lot You've given me so great advice I'll definitely work on more

[All4ur_pleazure]

@nicolaj35 Stimulate the mind! Paint that picture and make it feel like the reader is there experiencing it for themselves even though it’s your story.

[NicolaJ35]

I will definitely do that

[Daniela1982]

Actually happened? Sounds phonier than a 3 dollar bill. I really don't know why you would be so proud to share it if it were true. Seems kind of trashy to do but whatever floats your boat - or sinks it.

[NicolaJ35]

To be honest, I kinda wondered why I shared this after all You have a point Daniela

[Daniela1982]

I should have read more. I didn't notice that it was something you wrote. Er, at least I don't think you really did it?

[NicolaJ35]

Yeah we did it and at the time it seemed a fun thing to share

[ohshee]

Mm Mm write me something and I will tell you

[Karin_Anna]

Anyone can, just form your ideas and characters and play with it. Try not to come across like that girl on American pie "this one time, at band camp"

I receny took up writing erotica fiction and have 5 stories published, 3 of them have been considered hot in the ratings. Formulating the 6th.

[NicolaJ35]

That's so hot Karin hehe

[Karin_Anna]

Due to the lockdown, I was bored of TV and reading, so I just started writing. I had been wanting to give it a go for years but never could sit and concentrate. I just wrote as I thought, no plan etc. It was a nice feeling to get something approved and published

[NicolaJ35]

You got it approved which is amazing

[wankiam]

whether it happened or not im not sure you could be a writer as all you did was list a catalogue of events with no reference to feelings or emotions... sorry

[NicolaJ35]

That's a helpful assessment I'll work on it Thanks

[wankiam]

no worries, im pleased you saw what i meant

[NicolaJ35]

Yes I took it as constructive

[Ponderer234]

Omg you could totally be an erotic writer! I am a long time reader and fan of such writing and would love to talk with you and hear more from you! Feel free to pm me 😉

[NicolaJ35]

Thanks Glad you liked

[andreasderjuengere]

During the second line I lost interest.
Forced myself to read a little more, and... well... you could write porn scripts, maybe.

[NicolaJ35]

Is that some kind of compliment?

[andreasderjuengere]

Not really - I'm sorry. But it wasn't meant to be a blunt 'attack' either. To be constructive: your 'story' unfolds too fast; it actually HAS no story. That's why I mentioned porn.

[NicolaJ35]

Ah I see now, it requires a lot more detail, huh?

[andreasderjuengere]

Suggestion: Build up your story slowly, but raise interest in what's about to come right from the beginning, and keep it like this? Details are very ok; maybe not pouring them out in one big 'splash', but rather little by little? One example of 'classic' setups is to increase tension and get to a 'show-down' scenario close to the end?

[NicolaJ35]

Love your suggestions Going to be really helpful

[Ninjava]

Are these suppose to be facts or a short story? You need to work on your paragraphs.

[NicolaJ35]

Thanks for the tip

[_no_one_]

That was good tho, more detailings and it's ready to be published.

[NicolaJ35]

That good, huh?

[_no_one_]

I hv read worse erotica 🤦🏻‍♂️

[_no_one_]

And it was way better than that plus it was irl so u can express that even more naturally

[NicolaJ35]

I'll have to do another more explicit one?

[_no_one_]

I never said that u will have to do another one, all I am saying is that u can try to be more detailed coz details is what erotica fans crave for.

[NicolaJ35]

So true

[Walrus_au]

Anyone who writes erotic content can be an erotic writer. The question is how good are you? Are you good enough to get paid for it?

Not a publisher or editor, so I don't know that much about it.

My opinion? you need more practice.

[NicolaJ35]

Yes I agree

[Walrus_au]

you are looking for a narrative flow, not just a bullet list of things that happen. Are you trying for fiction or non-fiction?

[NicolaJ35]

Both I guess

[Walrus_au]

look into reading more fiction stories, maybe think about working through a creative writing course.

[NicolaJ35]

Good idea

[Walrus_au]

What I see there is more like an outline or skeleton of a story. ;) there is definitely potential.

[NicolaJ35]

Thanks for your feedback

[TonyT1986]

You have potential

[NicolaJ35]

Thanks Tony

[oncpl]

I guess you have potential to be a good erotic writer. Your present post is an example. Make your stories more descriptive and use couple of dirty words (you must have read in porn fiction ).

[NicolaJ35]

Got ya :)

[oncpl]

Try to write soon keeping in mind various suggestions given by gag friends.

[Forestfox]

You could be darling!

[NicolaJ35]

Thanks

[Gedaria]

Sounds good, I like it. Specially the girls playing together...

[NicolaJ35]

Hehe thanks

[Matieux]

Yes you could absolutely be an Erotic writer, I really like your story and It's even more great because it actually happened

[NicolaJ35]

It was fantastic, had to share

[NicolaJ35]

Not atm

[Matieux]

Ah ok

[Matieux]

So you want to be an Erotic writer?

[NicolaJ35]

Now i've written one I wonder if I could continue

[Matieux]

If you like it you should continue

[Matieux]

I'm kind of a fan of erotic story, there a bunch of them that I read on the internet sometimes

[NicolaJ35]

Think I will

[Matieux]

What do you say if I show you an erotic and you read it an tell me if you like it or not?

[NicolaJ35]

Sure

[Matieux]

Ok cool

[Matieux]

I don't want to post it here I will send the link in your Dm if you don't mind

[NicolaJ35]

Yes great

[Matieux]

So what do you think about the story?

[mT2359]

Wow... eeeeee😌

[NicolaJ35]

Huh?

[mT2359]

Wee Wee... u could & u should.

[NicolaJ35]

Considering it

[OpenNudist]

I would say yes, very sexy story

[NicolaJ35]

I know lol

[bananathunder]

Gave me a little chub...

[NicolaJ35]

Chub?

[bananathunder]

Made some blood rush to my dick lol

[NicolaJ35]

Bet it did lol

[bananathunder]

Lol I'd say that's a good thing... I wanted to read more

[NicolaJ35]

Yes it's a good thing, means it got you going lol

[bananathunder]

Keep up the good work!

[NicolaJ35]

Good work?

[bananathunder]

Lol it's an American phrase

[NicolaJ35]

Meaning what?

[bananathunder]

Keep doing what you are doing

[NicolaJ35]

Was thinking of rewriting the story with a lot more detail lol

[bananathunder]

Go for it! I'll read it

[NicolaJ35]

I know you will ;)

[bananathunder]

Haha oh yeah?

[bananathunder]

Message me if you want 😜

[Tstrbrainer]

You need more practice 🙂🙂.

Next time when you are going out with your friend, invite me 😝😝😝

[CubaPirate]

I'd prefer the video lol

[NicolaJ35]

Haha sure you would :D

[CubaPirate]

Yeah andi bet I'm not alone either lol

[NicolaJ35]

You're not alone I know